Review My Press Release?

themike537 · #1 () 09-23-2006, 10:15 PM

Hey, I'm doing a press release on prweb.com for a new site I just participated in launching, and would like a little feedback. This is the text of the release, it has all of the upgraded features on prweb too. View it here.

Thanks in advance, and once again, thanks to Jeremy for letting me use his quote!

losercore · #2 () 09-24-2006, 10:48 AM

I think you nailed it. That's what a press release should be. It's short, exciting and to the point. If I didn't know better I would be over there signing up right now...lol

I think this will catch good attention.

IMO It's done very well...

DealerDan · #3 () 09-24-2006, 08:45 PM

Just noticed the word "blog" isn't in there, I'd try and squeeze that in somewhere. Also the line about local poker games, getting "home" in there too would be good.

Those were just at a glance. I think overall it's good, just a couple of keywords missing you should try and squeeze in there somewhere.