Review this copy / Landing page

[hazo]

I really like the design that you have going here. However, since you have started this thread I have opened the link 5 times and not once have I stayed more than 10 seconds. I'm simply unable to focus with the words going across the whole screen. My advice is to change the size of the page so people do have to read 30cm lines.

Other people might not have as much trouble as me...but I have good eyes

Nick

[HodgeyBoy]

Just a little thing...

I would switch the sides around so that your "**** Poker Bonus Code and Review" is on the right of the page and the "About **** Poker" and "**** Poker Rating" boxes are on the left.

Reason being the way the viewers eye 'flows' across the page.

This is usually from left to right and, at the same time, top to bottom. So you want the bigger call to action to be in the bottom right corner.

Now, you've already adjusted things for those viewers who can't be arsed to read the whole review and given them a download button 'above the fold', which is great.

However, I just think it prompts a more instinctive response from those quick-clickers if you switch the sides. This would place that download button above the fold but bottom right instead of bottom left.

Just an opinion.

[TEENPATTINEWS]

Dear Andy,

I hope you are reading all the feedback we all are giving at PAP..I feel that you are 24 hrs playing on Poker Stars due to the 2X promotion instead of working on the Poker Stars review on your site. I just checked your site again after a couple of days and can still see the errors in the Poker Stars review.

The Bonus at the top is showing as 50 but at the bottom is showing as 35.

Also, the CAPITALIZATION of brand names or even making them bold is not done till now.

Seems, you will be on Stars all July..as I can see that I sent you a PM here on PAP on 4th July but am yet to get any response from you on that till now...

Good luck with your Pstars Points for July..and hey..nice stats..I saw the 800 Dollar profit day on P Stars mentioned in your blog post.

Thanks and Regards.
Raj
Affiliates---.com < Launching soon to service affiliates>

[Andy Poker.Vg]

thank you dude. Yeah, last week i was basically playing all the time. Had a 5k week + earnt like 100k fpp (can you say $1500 bonus)

I saw a post on jeremys blog saying that affiliates should concentrate more on the affiliate side compared to actually playing. I feel like im on the boundary at the moment. I think i have some sick affiliate skills from my past sites in other industrys but im getting to the point where i can make a ton of money from poker also.

Right now im trying to balance them both, its hard to launch a new site when your poker income is instant, and you never know when your gonna get a big score. Wheras investing in my poker site will be a long term investment and should bring some passive money.

Again, id like to thank everyone for there comments, i will be proofreading everything on the reviews and editing the copy again before the site is "launched"

The coding is almost done on the site, and i have set a deal with a poker training site to get there integrated vbulletin hand history converter / replayer, which will be needed before i launch.

The next few months are going to be exciting.